Evaluative feedback from Memory Box

After completing our opening sequence, we screened it to members of our media class enabling us to redeem feedback. We were given numerous positive comments. 

People told us that the plot line was effective and understandable. Also alot of people commented on the use of good continuity.

They also said that it was very emotion capturing.  Although there were many positive comments, there were also some negative comments which we expected and are always expected. 

People said that the music wasn't brilliant and effective. And not as sync. 

08.12.08 - UPDATE

At present we are using our media lesson time to prepare props to use when filming. As lessons are only short we are unable to film sometimes as the traveling takes a long time, so we are slightly behind on filming and use spare time after college to film. Lack of time is not only an issue but also the absence of group members delays filming. 

This is the new title that we will be using in the opening sequence, as we made a spelling error in the last title.

Just a reminder that we are awaiting the chosen main character to confirm that they are able to dedicate time to appear in our sequence. Man on fire	Memory Box
Company logo	ASJ production
Fox 2000 pictures + regency enterprise presents…..	Time production pictures presents…..
A Tony Scott film	A Dark Chambers film
Denzel Washington – main character	Jessica Daley
Introduced a narrative	None – just music
Man on fire – title of film	Memory Box
Dakota Fanning	Charlotte Mackley
Chris walken	Sara Middleton
Etc.	????
Casting by…	Amie Wood
Costume design…..	Jessica Daley
Music by….	Samantha Tait
Associate producers…	Lydia Martin, Thomas Evans & Amanda Douglas.
Film editor	Jessica Daley
Production designer…	Samantha Tait
Director of photography…	Amie wood
Executive producers…	Amanda French & Rebekah Day
Based on a novel	None
Screen play role	Samantha Tait, Amie Wood & Jessica Daley
Directed by….	Samantha Tait, Amie Wood & Jessica Daley

Basic list of props and locations.

Props and location list- Memory Box

Props:

·      Pictures

·      Belt

·      Newspapers

·      Radio

·      Box

·      Bracelet

·      House

·      Chairs

·      Bed

·      Pens

·      Letters - with addresses on

·      Bag

·      Car

.   Television

.   tinfoil 

.   Toys 

 

 

 

Location:

·      Detached house in Seaton.

·      In the little girls bedroom.

·      In a bedroom which looks older.

·      In the living room

·      In the street.

. Old fashioned spare room. 

Today we have decided to change the logo design, as the other one looked childish and was not suitable for the opening sequence, as it didn't look professional and presentable. we changed the purple background, to a gray colour and enlarged the camera lens to make it stand out more . we also made another title page, which has the dark chambers film title on it. For this we decided to use a candle and a darkening effect and for the text we used just a white font and placed it in the middle of the flame, so it stands out more. 

A Dark Chambers Film Logo

After completing the logo and the posting it upon our blog, we recognised  that the name of the company had a spelling mistake, the logo will be edited when we have time, as this isn't one of our main priorities.